rayvyn2k: Shagging Hermione (Shagging Hermione)
rayvyn2k ([personal profile] rayvyn2k) wrote2015-06-22 11:42 pm
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Scribbling, scribbling

Rewrote the first 3 chapters of my multi-chapter fic "The Binding of Hermione", which I think I'm going to change to simply: The Binding. Not sure yet.

I am trying to ret-con the piece to age her up some (made her 20 instead of 17), re-set it during the second year after the War, even tho it's obviously still AU since Snape lives.

And instead of Lucius/the Death Eaters being the bad guys, I'm making it Draco. He's gone a bit mad, I think, but I'm still pondering that, at the moment. We'll see.

I am quite enjoying the exercise. Plus, I am ashamed to say, it really needs this run through. The punctuation was horrid, for a start.

Hermione was wildly out of character. Which I've managed to correct, mostly, I think.

Anyway. I think it's better.

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