Revisiting a Ten year old fic

I have massively rewritten one of my stories, Promises, because I suddenly had an idea for a sequel.

It's set during Christmas of Sixth Year, Hermione is of age in my story. SS/HG, NC-17. I've got the sequel half written, but when I reread the original story--it needed more of everything. So I've added about 700 more words.

I'd appreciate it if some of you would read it and let me know what you think.

Also, so many thanks and warm wet snogs to you all. Your comments the other day helped so much. I love you guys.