Scribbling, scribbling
Jun. 22nd, 2015 11:42 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
rayvyn2kRewrote the first 3 chapters of my multi-chapter fic "The Binding of Hermione", which I think I'm going to change to simply: The Binding. Not sure yet.
I am trying to ret-con the piece to age her up some (made her 20 instead of 17), re-set it during the second year after the War, even tho it's obviously still AU since Snape lives.
And instead of Lucius/the Death Eaters being the bad guys, I'm making it Draco. He's gone a bit mad, I think, but I'm still pondering that, at the moment. We'll see.
I am quite enjoying the exercise. Plus, I am ashamed to say, it really needs this run through. The punctuation was horrid, for a start.
Hermione was wildly out of character. Which I've managed to correct, mostly, I think.
Anyway. I think it's better.
I am trying to ret-con the piece to age her up some (made her 20 instead of 17), re-set it during the second year after the War, even tho it's obviously still AU since Snape lives.
And instead of Lucius/the Death Eaters being the bad guys, I'm making it Draco. He's gone a bit mad, I think, but I'm still pondering that, at the moment. We'll see.
I am quite enjoying the exercise. Plus, I am ashamed to say, it really needs this run through. The punctuation was horrid, for a start.
Hermione was wildly out of character. Which I've managed to correct, mostly, I think.
Anyway. I think it's better.
