Last mention of my birthday...I hope

[rayvyn2k]

Got more birthday cards in the mail today. Got one from one of my Delphi Forum friends which was a perfect card for me...has the doctor holding a naked baby by the ankle (the implication is he's spanking it for the first breath)and inside it says "From the day you were born, you were into the kinky stuff." And she wrote that this card just screamed "ray" to her. Hee. You see, she's read some of my fanfic...

The second card was from my dear friend in Texas who I love and miss so much. My first ever Star Trek buddy and my best friend for ever so long. I've known her longer than almost anyone else, and we shared so much...I hope that someday I get to visit her or she gets to visit me again.

The last card I got was from my best friend in Ft. Lauderdale, my sweetest little punk girl (heh or she used to be until she decided to get a 'real' job). We've been through Subway, growing kids, college, term papers...so much. I am so sad that she will be in NY when I go for my quick visit in September...but she sent me a gift certificate to RED LOBSTER!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! My hubby can't get out of it now!


I've also got a mad plot-bunny loose in my head. It all started with a little meme that snegurochka_lee posted on her LJ which was Give me any HP pairing, and I'll write you a one line story. Of course I gave her "Snape/Hermione" because: 1) I know she hates that pairing; and 2) I knew she'd come up with something amazing.
I was right on both counts. Here's what she wrote for me:

Snape loves the way that Hermione's breasts swell under his touch, the way she throws her head back and calls his name, the way she parts her legs so willingly for him, and most of all – the way her pink hair returns at the end of the hour, and as she pulls at her restraints he hides a grin, knowing that he's finally found a way to get back at that filthy werewolf.

I love it. Of course my brain starts whirring, and I had to sit down and write. Five pages later, I had half of a smutty one-shot which is going to head over into slashy territory next. I'm ever so grateful to LB for the sentence which is letting me explore Snapes darker side. And I'm liking it ever so much!

Hubby went back to the doctor again today as he has not been able to shake the cough which has been bothering him for weeks now. He was also going to go stake out the house and septic area on the property so the surveyor knows where things are supposed to be...don't ask me why the guy just can't go survey five acres from the fence-row downward, but whatever. Hubby isn't home yet, but I expect him any time. I was hoping to get some writing done, but there was a bit of bother on my favorite forum which needed attending to, and my friends are much more important to me than anything else.

Dang, this is a long update for me, guess I'd better stop now.

Comments

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

It's funny what sets off the plot bunnies. I remember reading a fic challenge and thinking, 'huh, not a single idea.' Two weeks later I had four entries. *shakes head*

(Can't wait to read your smut bunny!)

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

Can you point me in the direction of any slashy (semi-mild) BDSM? I have never really written any slashy s-e-x before (the rape in my Severus joins the DEs fic doesn't count) and I want to make it hot. I have a couple of ideas, I'm just trying to make the whole restraints/slash thing make sense, you know? I think I've figured it out, but I might have to do some research.

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

slashy (semi-mild) BDSM lol! Ummm, the only one I know of off hand is my own Snupin. I'll probably have the first chapter in the Wolfsbane que (hopefully) tomorrow. With luck, it won't take as long as Ashwinder. For the best recs, ask Lee. She not only reads more than I do, she remembers who wrote what. I believe Cravache has some good ones - I've even read some of them - but I can't remember the names.

...I might have to do some research *hee* That's the fun part.

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

Would you mind if I got a sneak preview? If not, will you email it to me at rayvyn2k@gmail.com? I'd appreciate it...if you don't want to, no worries!!

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

I don't mind. Soon as I finish ironing out one or two things, I'll send the first part. Right now, Lee and I are having a discussion about footwear, and how if I put Lupin in slippers it will turn him into her grandfather and totally ruin the sex. ;D

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

LOLOLOL typical Lee. What does she think he should be wearing, cowboy boots?

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

Weeeelll, it's a long story. She didn't like the slippers. I didn't like bare feet (why would he have bare feet if he was fully dressed otherwise? Specially living in that drafty old pile of Black's.) She asked why mention them at all, and I said if I didn't - after remarking the removal of every other item of clothing - that someone (like me) would say, "What about his shoes?" and would then form the mental image of Lupin fucking while wearing nothing but black socks. She implied - in the nicest possible way, of course - that no one was as anal picky had the eye for detail that I did, and that the sex was hot enough that if some one did notice, they wouldn't care. She said something to the effect of, "GET NEKKID ALREADY, WOULD YA?!"

*le sigh*

I really enjoy going back and forth with her, whether it's her story or mine.

Cowboy boots... hmmm...

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

That is so hilarious, because I know someone else (yours truly) who is anal observant just as detail oriented. In fact, I make sure to mention the shoes coming off EVERY TIME I have fully clothed people getting naked. Sheesh.

I think slippers, or you could call them "house shoes". That's what my husband calls them.

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

LOL! She accused me of making her put shoes on one of her characters once (which I don't remember) but I bet it was you!

You'll know the paragraph when you come to it. I'd love to hear what you think. To shoe, or not to shoe?

[dora-the-nymph.livejournal.com]

*laughs*

I think Lupin should be wearing slippers. Because he just should.

Cannot wait for your fic or Ray's smutlet!

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

The "smutlet" is getting long. 10 doc pages and counting...eek!

[dora-the-nymph.livejournal.com]

Yay! Long is good!

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

Yep, that's what I always say...LONG is GOOD...hehehehehehe

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

Sounds like what happened to Snupin - a one-shot. Some 25,000 words later...

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

25,000 WORDS??? Damn, woman. I can't wait to get home and read it. I'm dying sitting here and the clock seems to have stopped.

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

But I only sent the first 11,800 words. Plus a little something extra...

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

Right! Lupin and slippers. I thought so...

Lee's comments:
...but what is it about the man's feet you're so insistent on!?!

I dunno. I'm dying to hear what Ray has to say about it. (I got bored and posted it to Wolfsbane and E&S, but it'll be in the que a while, I imagine, so I can always sneak in and edit it in case Ray says, "WHAT ABOUT HIS SHOES?!?")

[dora-the-nymph.livejournal.com]

Lee's comments:
...but what is it about the man's feet you're so insistent on!?!

Well, they are attached to Lupin, and therefore sexy. That should be enough :p

I will read when it's posted. Can't wait.

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

Well, they are attached to Lupin, and therefore sexy. lol!

I went back and pulled it off E&S. Figure it's prudent to let my beta (and the admins at Wlfsbn) finish with it first. Easier to do edits on one site at a time...

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

Which if he has shoes on and doesn't take them off--you bet I'll be saying exactly that. LOL

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

A woman after my own heart! I just don't mention them. We'll see if it works.

[snegurochka_lee]

Hem HEM! *puts hands on hips, swaggers into thread* I can hear you, you know!

So. What is this about cowboy boots? *drifts off in fantasy*

No, remusly, it's like the hottest stripping scene ever...

Remus shuddered with pleasure as Snape slipped his robes off his shoulders, soft fingers gliding over Remus's skin like silk, then under his shirt, vanishing the buttons in one movement. It was getting difficult to breathe, the temptation unbearable, the heat in the room rising with every downward sweep of Snape's hands... at Remus's trousers now, unfastened and slipped down... down... falling to the floor with sweeping grace. Remus bit his lip, feeling himself harden more with every touch, desperate to be rid of his clothes, and Snape's, to just drag them both down to the floor... Snape moved lower now, and Remus made to step out of his trousers...

But first, Snape stopped to remove Remus's fuzzy slippers.

Um? Surely, you see my objection. And you also see why it doesn't flipping matter if the footwear get stripped off! Get on the bed, get nekkid, and GET THOSE COCKS MOVING, would you? Jeesh.

*pets smoke*

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

OMG! I haven't laughed this hard in ages!

I did NOT write that. I wish I did! *considers stealing paragraph*

*discards idea - Lee would hunt me down and kill me*

OK, OK, the footwear is gone!

*staggers off, still laughing*

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

Or you could simply have Snape begin on his knees by removing the shoes and socks of his master.

Snape sank gracefully to the floor. He slid his hand along the inside of Lupin's leg, downward until he reached his foot. In a smooth motion, he slipped the house shoe off of first one foot and then the other. He set them aside, and then returned his attention to Lupin's sock-clad feet. With a practiced motion, he bent and trailed his hot tongue along the inside of the other man's leg as he rolled the first sock down. When it finally dropped off onto the floor in a shape faintly resembling a condom, Snape busied himself licking and sucking the toes of his Master. When he had finished, he repeated the action on the other foot. Lupin's cock was straining already and the only thing which had been removed were his shoes and socks.

So there. :P

[islandsmoke.livejournal.com]

in a shape faintly resembling a condom,

I lost it, right there...

Oh, I love to laugh!

[gina-r-snape.livejournal.com]

Happy Birthday!

Red Lobster is a guilty pleasure of mine too. :grin:

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

I LOVE Red Lobster! It's one of my faves, and hubby weasled out of taking me there on my b-day, but now he has NO excuses! heehehehehehe

oooohhh can't wait!

[(Anonymous)]

I know Ray, I'm horrible at saying Happy Birthday - but hugs and kisses and wishes for many shags from dh! And I'm sooo glad you got a Red Lobster giftcard. That is mahvelous, darling!

Anne

Re: oooohhh can't wait!

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

I'm glad too. I didn't tell hubby, but I was disappointed that he weasled out of taking me there on my b-day.

Birthdays!

[(Anonymous)]

Glad you liked the card, it did scream Ray to me. Once I picked it up I couldn't put it back. I'm glad the house is progressing and is that new stuff on the link? Shanni

Re: Birthdays!

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

Yep, lots of new smut coming soon!

[snegurochka_lee]

The things Snape could do with his tongue were heavenly, Lupin decided, as he sank down onto the bed, unable to stand on his tingling feet any longer. Snape followed, casting his eyes over Lupin's still-clothed body with a barely-hidden smirk before settling once more at the man's feet. He drew one perky toe into his mouth gently, sucking on it with such reverence that Lupin had to throw his head back in a deep moan at the sensation. Never before had such ministrations to his *feet* elicited such a strong response in other areas of his body. His cock strained to impossible hardness, and he wasn't sure he could last much longer.

It was the double-big-toe action that finally undid him. Snape's tongue swept masterfully over the largest digits, pushing them together at the bottom of the bed and taking them both into his mouth. Lupin didn't think it was possible for Snape to wrap his lips around both thick toes, and the sight of it was unbearably arousing. Unable to hold off any longer, he reached down and fisted his cock roughly, pulling at a frantic pace as Snape set a punishing rhythm on Lupin's toes, thrusting them between his lips.

Lupin came with a strangled cry, his hand convulsing around himself as the sensation in his toes made his entire body explode. Snape released the toes slowly, letting one, then the other, slip out of his mouth, then licking his lips, careful to keep his dark eyes trained on Lupin.

*shakes head* ;-)

[snegurochka_lee]

Oops, sorry, that showed up in the wrong place. *curses*

[rayvyn2k.livejournal.com]

OMG, that made me laugh out loud. It's a good thing I wasn't drinking anything.
You win, I give!! LOLOL